Feedback

Newspaper

• Adverts do not use enough colour or contain images
• NASA story - too much white space and not personal to local area
• No cohesion
• Good amount of stories
• aq lot of national stories
• photo of child on front page is not how it should be, should be more lead o.
• a lot of blank space
• No cohesion
• A lot of stories

Website

• Mast head needs to be in capitals to match newspaper
• good links
• Not set out like a real website
• Video gallery is a good idea
• Could make website look more exciting
• lots of stories
• good hyperlinks